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G2theD

(601 posts)
Mon Aug 1, 2022, 03:05 PM Aug 2022

Question for lyricists

Last edited Mon Aug 1, 2022, 04:59 PM - Edit history (1)

I’m looking to write music for a song but am terrible at lyrics. Good lyrics inspire me. Does anyone have any lyrics that you could share with me? They don’t even have to be that good.

You will get a credit for writing the song and all proceeds will be split 50/50. (That was a joke).
I just want to do this for myself. I feel I can create a good song but need help.

Thanks in advance for anyone taking me seriously.

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Question for lyricists (Original Post) G2theD Aug 2022 OP
one good line is my main goal Tetrachloride Aug 2022 #1
What about the other lines? G2theD Aug 2022 #11
Write about something that you care about or inspires you. TheRealNorth Aug 2022 #2
What kind of music do you play? Bayard Aug 2022 #3
I like almost all genres. G2theD Aug 2022 #6
There's always scat singing! Shermann Aug 2022 #4
Scrambled Eggs. G2theD Aug 2022 #8
I once used the poem by robert frost , fire and ice, so you could try looking that option Fullduplexxx Aug 2022 #5
How did that turn out? ggma Aug 2022 #7
I'm curious too. Also what genre did it turn into? G2theD Aug 2022 #10
heavy on guitar heavy rock/metal depending on your definition of metal Fullduplexxx Aug 2022 #13
Robert Frost must have rolled over in his grave. G2theD Aug 2022 #14
I will post it and send you the url Fullduplexxx Aug 2022 #15
Oh good! Thanks - looking forward to it. G2theD Aug 2022 #16
Here it is .. the song was written by a group called cerberus we did some minor tweaking to it Fullduplexxx Aug 2022 #17
That was great. My kind of rock! Thanks. G2theD Aug 2022 #18
You are welcome and thank you ....nt Fullduplexxx Aug 2022 #19
Here's one StopDesantis Aug 2022 #21
Yea it came out well .. heavy on guitar heavy rock/metal depending on your definition of metal Fullduplexxx Aug 2022 #12
Good idea. Thanks! G2theD Aug 2022 #9
You can use these lyrics StopDesantis Aug 2022 #20
Welcome to DU! KS Toronado Aug 2022 #22
Thank you. Appreciated greatly. G2theD Aug 2022 #23

Tetrachloride

(8,478 posts)
1. one good line is my main goal
Mon Aug 1, 2022, 03:11 PM
Aug 2022

Choose at least one of these to be uncommon:
vocabulary
intonation
instruments
rhythm

G2theD

(601 posts)
11. What about the other lines?
Mon Aug 1, 2022, 05:02 PM
Aug 2022

If you have one good line and the rest sucked wouldn’t that pretty much make it a sucky song? And elaborate in what you meant that at least one should be uncommon?

TheRealNorth

(9,629 posts)
2. Write about something that you care about or inspires you.
Mon Aug 1, 2022, 03:15 PM
Aug 2022

That always helped me when writing poetry.

G2theD

(601 posts)
6. I like almost all genres.
Mon Aug 1, 2022, 04:45 PM
Aug 2022

Everything I do is with Ableton and a keyboard (Roland synth).
I just have no lyrical ability. I don’t know why, but I just want to try getting some lyrics.

One possibility I just thought of is using lyrics from songs I’ve never actually heard before and use that as my inspiration. Of course that would not ever get outside of my own computer.

Shermann

(8,698 posts)
4. There's always scat singing!
Mon Aug 1, 2022, 03:41 PM
Aug 2022

I think a lot of songs materialize out of scat singing. Nonsense words are improvised based on their sound and musicality, and then partial ideas with real words will pop out. Then inspiration occurs and you go with it.

G2theD

(601 posts)
8. Scrambled Eggs.
Mon Aug 1, 2022, 04:48 PM
Aug 2022

It’s the meaning of the words that makes me able to feel the song. Gibberish lyrics would not do that. I know I sound crazy, and maybe I am, but I think that’s what I need.

Fullduplexxx

(8,342 posts)
13. heavy on guitar heavy rock/metal depending on your definition of metal
Mon Aug 1, 2022, 05:51 PM
Aug 2022

I thought it came out well . It was written a while ago

G2theD

(601 posts)
14. Robert Frost must have rolled over in his grave.
Tue Aug 2, 2022, 01:01 AM
Aug 2022

He probably barely got to see electric guitars let alone metal.
I’d get a kick out of hearing it!

Fullduplexxx

(8,342 posts)
12. Yea it came out well .. heavy on guitar heavy rock/metal depending on your definition of metal
Mon Aug 1, 2022, 05:47 PM
Aug 2022

It was written A while ago .

G2theD

(601 posts)
23. Thank you. Appreciated greatly.
Wed Aug 17, 2022, 12:19 AM
Aug 2022

Great music too. I know this a lot to ask and if you can’t do it I understand completely, but do you have the lyrics written down? I couldn’t make out some of the words. Otherwise I’ll have to guess. I’d rather use the actual words though.

Regardless, thank you very much. I don’t want to listen to it again right now because I already have an ear worm for that tune!

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