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Atticus

(15,124 posts)
Tue Nov 1, 2022, 08:26 PM Nov 2022

He knew not where he'd be laid to rest when he entered this world of strife

He'd no idea the earth was round when he began his life
He grew to manhood, pulled his weight and watched the seasons turn
But never wondered if there was more and so he did not learn
That every shelter has its cost and safe's not always best
He played it safe he took no risks and never left the nest
I passed his grave this morning in a weedy churchyard plot
Just off the dusty gravel road, but mourn him I could not
He'd never died as he'd never lived. It's a sad sad thing to say
But no one would have noticed had he lived another day
It did not have to be this way---a life he lived in vain
Had he understood that a life well-lived requires that we know pain
His stone's in the rear view mirror now; I'll not see it again
It's all he leaves behind to prove he's ever really been.

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He knew not where he'd be laid to rest when he entered this world of strife (Original Post) Atticus Nov 2022 OP
Wow, I didn't realize you were a poet. This is excellent. I really like it. Extremely well done! MLAA Nov 2022 #1
Thank you for your kind words. nt Atticus Nov 2022 #3
This is amazing Rachel M at 6 pm Nov 2022 #2
Thank you for your kind words. nt Atticus Nov 2022 #4
This is amazing lillypaddle Feb 2023 #5
Thank you. nt Atticus Feb 2023 #6

MLAA

(18,654 posts)
1. Wow, I didn't realize you were a poet. This is excellent. I really like it. Extremely well done!
Tue Nov 1, 2022, 08:52 PM
Nov 2022

Rachel M at 6 pm

(137 posts)
2. This is amazing
Wed Nov 2, 2022, 10:17 AM
Nov 2022

Are you Robert Frost?

I especially love this...

"That every shelter has its cost and safe's not always best
He played it safe he took no risks and never left the nest"

Coincidentally, my mind has been on this subject for a few days now, after finding the lyrics (that I'd previously not understood) to an old song

The song was "Open Your Heart" by the Human League...

"Being an island, shying from trying seems the easy way, such an easy way. But there's no future without tears"

There's no future that does not include tears, so why play it safe? You're going to cry either way. Might as well take the risks rather than hide from the world

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