Glory and I

[barbtries]

I just came back from a vacation on the Best Coast (CA and ID), and while there I reconnected with a dear friend whom I have not seen since moving to NC in 2007. Neither of us stopped talking from hello to good-bye and it was a fabulous time.
it was wonderful so I wrote this poem. Been a good long time since I wrote a poem at all let alone one I like. It may not be finished yet, but hope you enjoy

Glory and I


So
We figured it all out,
Two aging rivers converging and then
Fifteen years flattened to a day or so,
The words flowing like water,
Meeting and splashing and somehow knowing
These words must be said.

So much to say. So much to share

We covered it all:
Death, life, grief, joy, love, compassion, faith, justice
Is this the meaning of life? it feels like it is.
What else matters?

We drove
Around in senseless, hilarious circles, and we laughed.
We smoked many cigarettes

So.
We were several years older but the years disappeared
Even our aches and pains and gripes and complaints
Were rendered small;
Our families all multiplied, our dramas met without distress
In the moment. Just friends.

Just friends, just friends, just all we need
Right here right now.
We are older, we are wiser, we are
Exactly the way we ever were.

The sun was shining, the traffic was bad
As was my sense of direction.
The time passed as fast as the fifteen years
That passed while we never spoke,
Because it disappeared
Just like that.

[Karadeniz]

1. You've PERFECTLY captured this special moment !!!!! Well done !!!

[barbtries]

2. thank you!

i had such a great vacation it made me want to write it all down. it's been a long time since I did that after writing my entire life.

[Waterguy]

3. true - like a letter meant for a true friend

everything, simplicity, spelling out honesty, trying to convey,
how you feel, distances both geographically, possibly more,
within any time and space,
And the unsaid universe comes rushing in unabashed.
The same old friend, with the same old shit -
but you know what, that's love.
Your peom illustrates,
Your intellect has surely survived, whilst,
your heart has surely decoded something more true -
deepfelt sorrow, friendship, love,
the animal expression defined as simply real.

[barbtries]

4. Thank you Waterguy!

It was a day.