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Ozymanithrax

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Mon May 23, 2011, 02:39 PM May 2011

Working the Novel...Working it. [View all]

I've written two drafts of a novel, and am working the third now. I've learned things about myself that help me fine tune my own writing method.

The First draft hit 103,000 words.
Second Draft hit 104,000 words. I printed the novel, read it through, marked it up and hit a wall. I found the process of entering changes very difficult. That is the way I wrote many college papers, and a number of short stories, but they are all shorter. But reading back through a long paper document is more difficult than I imagined, especially since I deleted about 20,000 words and added about 21,000 better words.

Draft 3: Because the book drags, I made a decision to change the POV from past third to present third. I'm doing it all on the screen, reading each chapter through and making changes as I read. It is coming out much better. Eventually, before I submit, I will need to print the damn thing and read it through aging, but I am gong to delay that until I think it is 10% right on the screen.

What do you guys think?

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Working the Novel...Working it. [View all] Ozymanithrax May 2011 OP
Hey there! onlyadream Dec 2011 #1
Editing is always a slog for me sybylla Dec 2011 #2
I love editing. When I change something awkward to something McCamy Taylor Feb 2012 #3
I think I've hit that next level of editing. Keystone Writer Feb 2012 #5
Standard rule: Edit by subtraction. HopeHoops Feb 2012 #4
Just a quick note... Fearless Apr 2012 #6
Maybe you need to step away from it for a bit. SheilaT Jun 2012 #7
Have you tried the outline/proposal? Baitball Blogger Jul 2012 #8
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