Can I get some feedback on an article?

[HopeHoops]

5. I finished the German text and am back on the book. I've broken it down into a few basic comments.

My problem is being long-winded. There are a few basic things that need to be addressed that are directly relevant to the book, but there are many more that I want to address that aren't germane to the review. Between illness and another back fracture, I've been a little behind the power curve on everything. Bills are high on the agenda for today, if I can sit up that long. The task has not been forgotten and perhaps I think about it too much. I'll do my best to get it ready within a week.

I believe you asked me a while back what I though of Wittgenstein as a person. That's not an easy answer. It's more what I think he became through his circumstances. He had a pretty fucked up life.